鼠ドル Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 I want to write words Beautiful and light That shine through the darkness Clear and bright But I choke up, Staring at the blank sheet in front of me, Spotted with salty tears I want to write poems That matters But all I could think of is this worthless poem (words are what you make them) 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 Nezu, I seriously love you. O_O What's this? It this a masterpiece? A random and short and blunt masterpiece? Because that's what it looks like to me. So right, so true, so GAHH. You get it. It's right on the spot. Makes me automatically think about when I want to write and it just doesn't come out and it's frustrating and I just feel like tearing the paper in a thousand scraps (...) Inspiration! Come out, come out... Wherever you are. It's well written a makes a person relate to it. Love the last strophe the most. *_* MORE! Please? foxy3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
鼠ドル Posted May 24, 2011 Author Share Posted May 24, 2011 Thanks Jenow, you're really too kind. I only have quite dark poetry, if that's OK? Haven't written in ages... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 Dark poetry is lovely. Post it, I'll feed on it. *licks lips* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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