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Can you handle the blood?

Is it something you hate?

Does the violence excite you?

Am I too twisted and broken for you?

Or is that why you keep coming back to riffle through the pages where I live?

Returning to see if I will change,

if the villain can become the hero?

You see all my flaws,

all my hidden thoughts,

yet you keep returning.

You have fingers as soft as the paper they caresses,

eyes deeper than the black

beyond the edge of the universe.

You twist your hair as you read of my trials and tribulations.

You bite your lip as I am wounded and left to bleed.

You call my name in your sleep.

You love me,

you hate me,

you want me,

you rape me.

I suffer gladly through it all.

Just hoping you will return to do it all again.

 

 

 

~dedicated to JenovaVII~

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You have fingers as soft as the paper they caresses,

eyes deeper than the black

beyond the edge of the universe.

You twist your hair as you read of my trials and tribulations.

You bite your lip as I am wounded and left to bleed.

You call my name in your sleep.

You love me,

you hate me,

you want me,

you rape me.

I suffer gladly through it all.

Just hoping you will return to do it all again

 

This really caught me... "Just hoping you will return to do it all again"

Really well written!

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...I'm speechless. Point for you.

 

I keep jumping in my chair, like a mad rabbit, and re-reading it. Over and over. Again and again.

It's beautiful. I can't see it myself but I know I'm grinning like a psycho. My jaw hurts.

There isn't a single sentence I don't drool over but this:

You love me,

you hate me,

you want me,

you rape me.

This is the sh*t. *_*

Well written, like always. And the title, so fitting. (:

The whole of it is just so sick and perverse. Just like us. Love it. Love you. Thank you.

Can I rape you now?

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