Ueda_Angel Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 The pain seems to engulf me Drawing out my soul The cries that come from me I can't seem to control I feel the blade's sharp edges It pierces my pale skin But as I watch the blood flow I know I cannot win I feel your long nails scratching me Creating scars anew And yet through all you do to me I still will not leave you. The blood, it flows so freely now That haunting crimson sight And yet although this seems so wrong It also seems so right. You see the wounds you've given me The scars upon my skin But I know you will give me more And purge yourself in sin You leave me lying lifeless now A smile on your face But no one sees the scars but you You never leave a trace. 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spacingstardust Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 wow, this it really good Tat-chan. It seems really emotional and draws the reader in, its rhyming scheme was amazing. good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata--chan Posted May 28, 2011 Share Posted May 28, 2011 Wow what a haunting poem so sad and I can relate to that feeling . I like your style of writing ^^ hope to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitemare Posted May 28, 2011 Share Posted May 28, 2011 its all gloomy and sad... I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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