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Would it be too much to ask

To hear the way you feel

To know that when you say the words

Each one of them is real

 

Would it be too much to ask

To be held in your arms.

To know that if I need it

You’ll keep me safe from harm

 

 

Would it be too much to ask

To feel your tender kiss

To know that when your lips touch mine

It’s ecstasy it’s bliss

 

Would it be too much to ask

To feel your silk smooth skin

To make it feel so good

It has to be a sin

 

Would it be too much to ask

To make forever real

To promise me no matter what

It’s how you’ll always feel.

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Love it :D it makes me to smack the one the poem refers so they can

Until they say its not to much to ask .

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So true when you want to know what the other person feels about you and you really don't get a straight answer. Beautifully put.

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Very, very beautiful! I like all the words you used, the way you made the sentences, well... the lines and it sounds really good, close to a song :)

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love it! love it! love it!

it's kinda how i feel lately about someone else... oh gosh...

i feel like printing it and putting on my journal!

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