nitemare Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Committing suicide is a crime But bullying isn't? This is my first poem ever, I don't usually do this. But I needed to express my feelings And this is the best way. I wrote it yesterday :cuteonion53: I know boys aren't supposed to cry But this pain wont go away And I really want to die I'm so broken people say ”Liam is so quiet and shy” But in reality my throat and eyes are all dry All this smiling and jokes I make My answers to people when they ask if I'm fine Its all just fake Dont judge me Wanna know why? Because boys don't cry I'm so broken people say ”Liam is so quiet and shy” But in reality my throat and eyes are all dry Cant they see my scars when they smile at me Cant they tell my hands are cold when they hold them telling me things will be fine? Cant they tell its all lies when they look into my eyes? All the bullying and threats at school When they threaten to kill me Does it make them feel cool? I used to hit back and fight like crazy But nowadays the depression makes me lazy Woke up yesterday thinking damn I'm still breathing God if you're hearing me, I am leaving! But what a fool I am, talking to a god I don't believe in I know boys aren't supposed to cry But this pain wont go away and I just really wanted to die So I did the most selfish thing yesterday. I cried, I cried, I cried and for the first time I chose not to hide No one should ever have a reason to commit suicide 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brohne Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 foxy3 aishiteru 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata--chan Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Liam *Hugs* love ya ! So glad your here ^^. And you should write more poems it helps me thru the hard times . 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 I know boys aren't supposed to cry But this pain wont go away and I just really wanted to die So I did the most selfish thing yesterday. I cried, I cried, I cried and for the first time I chose not to hide No one should ever have a reason to commit suicide ....... I love this part the most... Boys are supposed not to cry??....Who says????? Just the stereotypes....Ppl must get over them to live full of their life... Don't mind crying... If it makes you feel better Thanks for the beautiful and touchy poem 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 WOW! Nitemare those were powerful expressive words and this your 1st? Seems like you have been doing this for years. Emotions have a way with doing that to ppl they can express themselves thru poetry or words to a song. Hope you continue to share with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cherryyuri Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 beautiful! we can definitely feel the pain throught it.. and if you need anything... just say it! we're here for you!! but please, remember to not give up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 That is amazing, I enjoyed reading it ,but quite sad xxc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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