Leslie_LC Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 Belita, honestly, you are very talented! I've just started reading it today and couldn't stop until I finished it! It is so good, one of the best fanfics I've read so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! :hamtaro-005 (8): 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 yeahh!!!!...'unmei' scene!!!! ahahaha so Mina is younger than Hana????...wow~~~i like... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 Belita, honestly, you are very talented! I've just started reading it today and couldn't stop until I finished it! It is so good, one of the best fanfics I've read so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh man... I'm feeling like this :cuteonion58:onion4:cuteonion41::3onion15::cuteonion57::msn_red_fox 2:leaf3: Thank you so much... Thank you for taking your precious time to read it, i'm... (don't really have the words really) rabbit0 You people really make my days... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 yeahh!!!!...'unmei' scene!!!! ahahaha so Mina is younger than Hana????...wow~~~i like... Yeah, Mina san turnned out to be younger than Hana, but i really thought it looked cute, how the brat kept going after the grown up man Arigatou Junnie... Your support makes my heart like this :valentine223::valentine223: Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 Yeah, Mina san turnned out to be younger than Hana, but i really thought it looked cute, how the brat kept going after the grown up man Arigatou Junnie... Your support makes my heart like this :valentine223::valentine223: Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3: ahahaha....i accept the kiss with full of honour...^o^ wuahh...i think itz very exciting...Hana is older than Mina...itz something new... u're such a creative writer...excellence!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 Chap 8 is going to be posted in.... 6 5 4 3 2 1 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 Hi hi, Here it is chap 8 hope you enjoy... Arigatou to all of you who keep reading...From the bottom of my heart your support is the best... ________________________________________________________________________ Spell… Chapter 8 Truth was…I forgot. Never, for more than 2 years did I thought about the kid that messed me up badly in that afternoon. Never once, did he crossed my mind. I scratched his existence, from that day on i behaved like he never existed. I wanted to be with the person I was in love then, I wanted only him, take care of only him, to stay with him forever. Well I could say now that, I won’t, I won’t be loved like I wished, I won’t be together like I dreamed so many times we would be. I couldn’t stop the overflowing feelings inside… And the flood of tears started once more. He was standing still, looking at me, studying every one of my expressions. “Did you remember Hana-san…?” “Hum, Hum…(nod)” “Do you hate me now?!” “I…I’m confused…but I don’t hate you, I don’t think I do…” “I’m relieved(sigh)…I thought Hana san would once more dislike me…” Such a pained expression… “Once more?! I never disliked you…I just...Got all messed up that time at the Sakura meeting, I had never, ever, seen a smile like yours…a 16 year old brat messing my pace so easily(smile). I was angry at myself for feeling that way Mina-san, besides, you kept my secret right, I have only gratitude.” I caressed Mina’s face, it was so hot under my hand, like a fever, but also so comfortable… I felt he could protect me even from the worst blizzards. His eyes were shining. He got closer to me and took both of my hands on his. “I thought only about you all this time…(kiss on my hands)” His voice was low, mellow, soft…I felt like I was being confessed to in the sweetest way. My heartbeat started to speed up, and my temperature kept on rising… Mostly because he was so close to me, but also, all the things from the night before, where starting to show all over my body now. How could this be? Not even a touch yet, and all this desire built already… “Is it fate, Mina-san?!” “No…it’s love.(whisper)” He caressed my face, looking straight into my eyes never letting go, he kissed me, lightly…softly, like I was precious…valuable… “I’ve been waiting for you for too long already(hold me)….I just want to have you…Possess you. Won’t you let me stay by your side Hana…Won’t you let me love you?(whispered)Since I first saw you blushing hard by that Sakura tree(smile), I thought you we’re the most beautiful thing I’ve seen in my life. I have to have you, I thought then, but I was a kid, I kept waiting the years passed, but never once were out of my mind. You were my goal. There was nothing else I wished to have.” “You say that so easily… It’s not easy Mina-san…” “You’re talking about that guy?! He never loved you… He was always fooling around, having sex with other people, while you were left alone…” “How did you know that I was alone?” “I remembered who he was, I made friends with him at the bar I work part-time, and little at a time, he kept spitting out, that he already had someone, but it was turning boring… That he loved ya…But that you and sex, were two different matters… What the hell is that Hana…?! That’s no way of treating ya… And then I saw you that time…” There’s no way to describe the way he gaze at me then…He was desperately trying to explain something from within himself, his thoughts, his feelings… I felt a little happy, I was the source of this concern. Seemed like he was waiting for a very long time to take that away from his heart, like it was hurting him deeply. “And the way ya looked, you were breaking apart in front of my eyes and couldn’t even hold ya… I wanted to kill him for making you feel like that, to make him disappear from your heart so you could see only me…Is that asking for too much…?! Am I being greedy…Please don’t pity me, and say all ya have to say, all you think of me…cause I know I acted a little like a stalker and…” I kissed him lightly in the lips… The honesty reflected in his eyes was so obvious, like the earth being round. He didn’t have a doubt in his heart, and he was pursuing is own vision of happiness and love… I was fearful… Would it be ok giving him hope, I wanted to, but I looked back and remembered the two years of a relationship, that started beautifully and ended horribly. I don’t want that anymore. I don’t want to suffer anymore… “Won’t you give me a chance Hana-san? Won’t you let me love you, stay with you…” “I don’t know Mina-san, I’m…I…don’t know…” “Then let me show you how I want you just once more…Let me hold again, if still you don’t made up your mind…I’ll leave. I promise.” He got closer, and I could feel his desperation, could I deny that, could I deny the pleasure I know he could give me… It was hard to push him away, caressing me like that. All I could mumble were sounds of pleasure each and every time he touched a single place, a strand of hair, the whispers, so soft in my ear… I grabbed his neck and told him… “Don’t hurt me…please(tear)don’t leave me, that’s my small request if you wish to make me happy…love me more and more, never stop thinking of me… If you won’t stand then say it now, we won’t go further in this, and we will forget. If you don’t I will want you all for myself, I’ll become an egoistic person about everything about you(cry)…Will you stand that… Live only for me , love only me, do this…only to me…Could you do it?” I made him enter me, I wasn’t being able to stop wanting him anymore… Like a drug… The more you have…the more you want… The kisses weren’t enough, we wanted each other more, we caressed more, touched more… Going to a point when you wish to know each sensitive spot, what makes him gasp, breath heavily, heartbeat speed up… Could a relationship based on desire be possible? He loved me, yes… If I loved him…not yet…not just yet, but I could give him a chance, why not…. If he’s serious about it…We could try. I would keep a distance, a safe one, and for now I would go with the flow… “You’re mine(hold tight)… Never in this life will I give you to someone else… So you can bet that I’ll be here for ya, anytime, anywhere ya want me too…I became yours, the first time you looked at me, with that shyness of yours…I ain’t going nowhere, and you’re the one who needs to think if you can do it…” “I’ll try…(caress)for now I’ll be yours…Take good care of me, please…” “I will…(kiss/caress)I will…” No more words were spoken, they weren’t needed… The deep cold snow outside was a visible contrast, with the temperature inside the house… Hot, sweated windows, from our deep heavy breathing, seemed to be crying from the dropping accumulated perspiration… Making love to him, was by itself such experience, to top it off, so damn beautiful… He called me beautiful…he was the one blinding me from the world making me see only him… only his light… “You’re so perfect(breath), so beautiful(caress), (gasp)so perfect(breath)” “I love you(breath)…” The perfect contact with our bodies gave me the sense of two bells, being played at the same time, giving the most sweet melody ever made… We satisfied ourselves in each others touch, kiss, embrace… “Merry Christmas.” “Merry Christmas, Mina(kiss)…” We stared at the window watching the snow fall… Falling asleep in each other arms… The morning may bring whatever may bring. ________________________________________________________________________ Again thank you all for the support... A very big KISS f'o ya :leaf3: 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 so sweet!!!!.... im so lovin' it!!!!....i love possessive love... sugoi ne....*hugs*...im so in love~~ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 so sweet!!!!.... im so lovin' it!!!!....i love possessive love... sugoi ne....*hugs*...im so in love~~ Eheheh Junnie Yeah i made them a little bit to crazy and too posessive, cause one loves the other for years, the other just keeps on beibg hurt, so i thought ok...They'll all over each other now, ne Big kiss f'o ya Junnie :leaf3::leaf3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 I like it and hope it will have many other chapters! The uke is so cute, I want one as him ))) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 I like it and hope it will have many other chapters! The uke is so cute, I want one as him ))) You're a sweetheart as always... :3onion15: As for the uke, i wish i could find one for ya honey, but i don't know any :cuteonion53: Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 so lovu lovu Da ne so nice fic.i'm touching.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Author Share Posted July 27, 2011 Arigatou ne Miho chan rabbit13 Glad you liked it... Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 30, 2011 Author Share Posted July 30, 2011 Here it is chap 9... Hope you guys like it Spell... Chapter 9 When i woke up, i felt something really heavy on top of me. I tried to move but it was hard to get away from those strong arms, the more i tried to get loose the more they gripped tight. “Mina, i need to get up, please let me go...” “(muffed) No...it’s still early Hana-san, stay here a little while longer...(tight hug)” Oh my...so cute... “I have to Mina-san...” He started to move away... “Ok but i’ll get up as well, i’ll cook you breakfast...” He blinked an eye tom me and I felt warm just from his kindness... It was good to know he was there for me, it felt right... I was blushing like an idiot all over again.... “But Hana-san...don’t you want to give me a good morning kiss...?” I blushed even harder right on the spot, what was with that kind of question this early in the morning... “Mina-san!... Please i have to get ready...uh...don’t ask such things like this...” “Ok...” The sad, dejected look he had was unbearable, i just felt like hugging him again, kiss him a lot and never let go...even so i left the room, i was running a little late. I really needed a shower... I got to the bathroom and kept thinking about what was said on the day before. It seemed surreal. The words, the actions...They really happened... And i promised to be with him... Was i being too little cautious about this, or over cautious....Did i loved him or was this just an incredible attraction? I was getting confused so i decided to drop the thought. “We’ll see how this goes... i will take my conclusions later.” I got dressed so i could got to work, and when i got to the living room , he had already set the table, breakfast served, a huge smile on his face, like he didn’t saw me for like a year, all waiting for me...I loved that. “Hana-san i have to work today, my part-time at the bar is today so...i’ll be a little late but, can i come to meet you when i finish?” Another blush... “Don’t you have a house to go to?” “Well i do, but i rather stay with Hana-san....if you don’t mind...” Well i didn’t mind! Between spending the nights alone, laying in a bed all alone i much rather have him with me these cold nights. Not because of the cold, but because the warmth he brought to me was unlike anything else, unlike anyone... But i just couldn’t tell him that. “Well i don’t mind...so you can...just make sure you don’t wake me up (blush)...” He got closer and whispered... “I don’t know if i can do that.... (soft kiss)” “Mina-san...(hard blush)” “But i’ll try...it’s going to be really hard but i’ll try not to wake you... (smile)” I tried to change the subject. “Do you really have to work at that place...? I mean, i’m not judging or anything but don’t you belong to a very big, important family...? What are you doing working in a place like that...?” There was this drastic change in his expression... “It’s complicated Hana-san...” I felt insecure for the first time... “But you can talk to me right, i mean you can see me as a friend as well, if you need someone to talk to, you can confide in me, you know that, right?” “(soft kiss) Hana-san is so good to me... (smile)” I felt getting warm again...the closeness, and the way he spoke to me where like weapons against my desire, and i always lost to them... “Mina-san please...i really should be going...” I got out of the table, so i could take a safe distance...Another word, another touch and i would be lost... “Ok...work hard Hana-san...” “Thank you, you too... I’ll see you later then...” And i was out the door. As i was walking, i felt happy, the kind of feeling you have, when everything’s right, when happiness was just there for me to grab it. But a darkness came to obscure almost all the light... He didn’t explain, what happened with his family. The why was he working in that bar, when he belonged to a much brighter, amazing place... The thought occupied my entire mind, throughout the day, and didn’t let go. The reason behind it was because i was feeling that happiness from the morning fade... My heart was feeling small, and the pain, coming like waves as soon as i remembered his words, became worse. “What did he meant with...”it’s complicated”...I wish he could tell me, i don’t want him to feel bad, or to think i’m unreliable... I’m here for him.” Was it really so complicated, that he just didn’t want me to know, or was i a bother to be told about these things? “Man, i got to give my head a five minute break...” I went to grab a few things from the cafeteria and, all by myself went to eat at the garden below. It was freezing, but the cold air, helped to clear my mind. “I will talk to him later about it, i’ll wait for him to arrive, and trap him. I will make him say everything because i don’t want to feel like this... I hate it.” I finished my food and was about to get in the office building when, a person standing only a few steps from me looked terribly familiar. “Can i talk to you Hana?” Shu? Again? What did he want now, wasn’t what he told me two days ago enough...? “Please, i’m trying so hard to get away from everything related to you, so...why do you have to come here, again....?” “Please Hana(tremble)...Come back to me.” They destroyed my world in that moment...Those words. How could he? What did he want with saying that? What was he after? My destruction...? “Goodbye Shu. Don’t ever speak to me again, don’t ever look for me again...Forget about me. I’ll do the same thing about you.” I turned away, but he grabbed me. 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 30, 2011 Author Share Posted July 30, 2011 As soon as i looked at him, to face him, to order him to let me go, i saw a side of Shu i never, ever seen before. It was shocking... The usually, charming, all composed, even sexy business man, was looking more like a rag, an old, used, tearing one... It was sad to look at. “Please Hana, i can’t live without you...i’m so alone...i haven’t been with anyone, i didn’t even have sex with anyone, since you left, i’m all by myself, i miss you so much...please, come home, i swear i’ll change everything you think is wrong about me...i’ll try harder, i won’t fool around. But please, return to me...please give me another chance.” My already, slowly healing, heart broke to another thousand pieces all over again. I felt my legs, loose all their strength, but i hang on to a bright smile and a warm embrace, which suddenly became all my reasoning... All the inner strength i had to pull myself together when we broke up, all the seconds telling to myself it was all for the best for us to break up, to just let him be, he was once again taking everything away, but i wasn’t going to let him do it..Not this time. “I’m sorry Shu...I’m so very sorry you’re like this now...But i no longer wish to have anything to deal with you. The night i walked out of that house, all the feelings i had for you died.(pain)” “It can’t be Hana...(tremble)we were together for two whole years, you couldn’t have forgotten me already...It’s impossible, right?.” “Impossible you say(sigh)...Well, not impossible Shu, sorry but this is the reality... I won’t come back to you...I gave you my everything once(pain), and you treated me like i was trash(pain)...at first i won’t deny that, there was a time when i really felt you loved me, and i (pain)appreciate you for that...But we are different Shu, i started to realize that a long time ago, but i was...so afraid to be all alone that i hung myself to that small, little thing you gave me...But today(pain) i know it’s not enough for me...” “Hana...I’ll give you everything, I GAVE YOU EVERYTHING...” “No you won’t...and no you didn’t...you gave me what you thought was enough to make me all happy and quiet, but i always secretly wished for more...” “What do you want from me...? Then tell me i’ll do it, i’ll try, i swear to you to make up for everything i did wrong so far...so please, just think about it...We were happy once, i can make you happy, much happier that before, all over again...” “I don’t think so Shu...” “Why not?!...Unless you already found someone?” I felt my throat dry but i had to give him an answer. It wasn’t hard to say....a simple “yes” would do but, for this little word to come out of my mouth, i was finding it really hard to do so. Was it out of pity or was i afraid of getting Mina involved? I mean Mina knew Shu, and even if Shu didn’t remember Mina, there’ll surely be a problem later...a big one... But i hold on to my little braveness and said... “Yes Shu...i do.” “Is that so...” The man before me looked broken, beyond repair... But even if i felt so much sorry for him, i couldn’t let him have the best of me... I had to be strong, i had to protect what i promised Mina...and i would do so. “Sorry Shu, i love him... I won’t leave him for no one...you know i don’t fall in love easily, and that i don’t give in to anyone unless i really want to...But he is special, and he makes me feel so special too...” “I see...” “I have to go back to the office now...Now is really goodbye Shu. Please, don’t look for me anymore, i’m happy, you should try to find your happiness as well...” “You’re my happiness Hana...” I felt something so heavy being lift off my shoulders... And i was finally able to stand on my own two feet...with all my strength restored. “You found that out too late...I’m sorry..i really should go.” I left him there, in the freezing cold, just like he left me so many times when i waited for him to come back home...to come back to me...but, i gave a hard breath in and went inside the building. He stood there, alone. I didn’t look back anymore... Truth is i felt like i closed a chapter in my life. And i was relieved i did so. And tonight i would face Mina with a different confidence in me... I couldn’t believe it myself, i said it, and out loud too... I loved him...He was mine, and i was his... ________________________________________________________________________ Hope you guys like it it's a litte shorterhan usual cause, i separeted what i wrote in two parts, cause chap 10 it's almost ready and i'll be posting it soon as well... Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3::leaf3: 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted July 30, 2011 Share Posted July 30, 2011 Thank Bela, very good ch and so interesting Now Shu is coming to beg Hana hahaha I was waiting for this :leaf4: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted July 30, 2011 Share Posted July 30, 2011 Ohoho I knew this will happen sooner or later Hope Shu will appear again in the story It's so interesting. Good job once again Belita! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 30, 2011 Author Share Posted July 30, 2011 Ahahahha, Rei sama True, it was kinda obvious that Shu, would come back with his tail between his legs, i just hope i could show his desperation well... :cuteonion51: i was a little afraid to make him look like a ridiculous person, which he is not... Just having a bad moment after making all wrong choices :cuteonion8: Glad you like it, and so glad you keep on reading it... rabbit13 Thank you so much... Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3::leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 30, 2011 Author Share Posted July 30, 2011 Ohoho I knew this will happen sooner or later Hope Shu will appear again in the story It's so interesting. Thank you Matti honey leaf3 Glad you liked it... Big kiss f'o ya too :leaf3::leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted July 30, 2011 Share Posted July 30, 2011 True, it was kinda obvious that Shu, would come back with his tail between his legs, i just hope i could show his desperation well... :cuteonion51: i was a little afraid to make him look like a ridiculous person, which he is not... Just having a bad moment after making all wrong choices :cuteonion8: Yeah, actually you really did a good job in showing his desperation and regret without making him look ridiculous at all. He just looked like a person who is sorry for the way he acted. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 31, 2011 Author Share Posted July 31, 2011 Hi, here's chap 10. It's a little well...nothing much but just in case i put it like this... Hope you enjoy... Spell… Chapter 10 I was…restless and pissed. It was late, where was he?! “Humph…This is getting ridiculous…I ‘m going to bed…I’m not the kind of person to stand here waiting anymore…Whenever he get’s home, it’s fine by me…” Of course it wasn’t. I wasn’t able to even blink, so much for sleep, then I heard the key on the lock. I pretended to be asleep, I wasn’t sure anymore if I wanted to face him today. I mean, yes I was going to confront him about the matter of his family situation, I really wanted to put this behind my back, but if he knows that I waited till this late hour to talk to him… He’ll think that i…. The most pervert’s thoughts just kept popping in my mind and I was like the ripest strawberry, red all over. “I won’t make a sound…I’ll talk to him in the morning…” I closed my eyes, I stood very still in bed, hiding under the blankets. I felt when he sat on the bed, and the worse was… I started feeling something funny as well… I was turned on, excited, just from thinking about him for like 2 seconds…. I just kept thinking…calm down…calm down…all to no good… I was aroused, and the man just sat beside me in a bed, I was reaching a point of becoming ridiculous, what am I a high school girl?!... This was really bad. How was I suppose to explain this to him, if he sees me like this… “I have a hard on cause you sat on the bed…?! Oh my god this is beyond embarrassing…” He leaned over, and I felt his hair, softly brushing my face. I lost control then, I blushed even harder, my heart beat started to become irregular and faster all over again I was breathing heavily already….no good… He was going to notice, he was going to see the state I’m in right now, looking like a teenager on heat…this is no good, he’ll think I’m a pervert. “(chuckle) Still awake Hana-san…You said you already would be asleep…” I didn’t answer. I was bad at pretending an lying, but I wasn’t going to give in… My pride didn’t allowed me to. “Oh you’re really sleeping…ok then, I’ll just kiss you good night then…” The sensation of him leaning over me, the closeness, threw me over the edge. I wanted to feel him, I was hungry for it, I was almost ready to give in when I felt his hand under my pajamas… “You won’t wake up right Hana-san?! I’m just giving you my goodnight kiss…(whisper)I missed you so much today…It was unbearable not to see Hana-san all this time…I kept thinking about Hana-san’s lips(soft kiss), Hana-san eyes, Hana-san’s skin (touch)…” He was already driving me insane, I wouldn’t be able to get a hold on my mask for long, but I wasn’t going to give in that easily… “(muffed) I told not to wake me Mina…(totally aroused)” “(chuckle) So sorry Hana-san, I just missed you so much(hug)” “Mina please, I have to get up early in the morning…” “I know Hana-san…just a little more…I promises I won’t disturb much…(still kissing and touching all over...)” “Hah…Mina…don’t…please hah….get up….early….i…” “Sorry, I couldn’t really catch that, can y’a repeat…” “You’re hah, you’re…hah…teasing me…stop HAAH…” “I’m so sorry, so sorry, but I’m so wanting you right now…” My head went blank, I wanted to fight back but how…?! How can you fight against something that gives you so much pleasure… How can you say no, to this feeling that eats you up inside, leaving you empty only with the feeling that you’re falling so deep and in such a spiral of pleasure that’s unbearable to leave it, to refuse it… “Hah…. Hah hah hah, Mina…stop, stop…no more…” “(whisper)Really, you want me to stop Hana-san?! I will if you really want me too…” Was he for real...?! “You’re so, mean…How can I stop, now that you made me like this…?” “(smile) I’m so sorry Hana-san, I just couldn’t stop myself,(whisper) I want to love Hana-san all the time…(kiss) I want to feel you every time you’re near me, I cant help it…(whisper softly)I want to be inside you so badly…” His words ignited me…I was burning, my face started to hurt for blushing for too long… He rolled me to him…So I could face him… But still I couldn’t look at him, I was so embarrassed… I didn’t want to see me like this…Desire pouring out of me, like I was begging for his touch, for his kiss, so soft, so special… I hugged him closely, and breathed his scent… The sweet wild flowers became the only air I breath, the only scent in the world… “Don’t hide your face from me please…I want to see you(touch), to see your expressions, everything about you makes me desire you even more…” It’s insanity, to the point of hearing nothing, not being able to say anything, because all senses are too occupied with him, with the sensations he brings… “(soft whisper) You drive me insane… take responsibility for it…” “Anytime…(kiss) Anywhere…(kiss)…I just want you to be mine…” “Hahh, (breath)I’m yours already, can’t you see that, I (breath) ahh, I can’t fight you, I can’t deny you…you’re the one who did this to me…” He took my head between his hands, they’re so big, so warm, and started to kiss me softly again, like I’m breakable…He never took his eyes from mine, and that made me even more excited… He started to increase the beat, and the speed made my head spin even more… “(breath), so good, what you do to me…(breath) look at me, I’m like this in your hands…” “(grin)Hana-san…don’t be even more cute…” Following all the caress from top to bottom, I was felling numb, from all the lightening bolts striking every part he kissed… I once again I let myself go, and felt only him… “You’re like this already Hana-san…I didn’t know you were wanting me so much…(smile)” No coherent words would come out from my mouth at this point, so I decided not to even speak. “Can I enter you?(softly)” “Hum hum…” Was what came out, together with a shy nod… “Do you feel this…here…” He penetrated me without much preparation, I felt everything…Too much… “Hahhh…..yeah…yes…” “Do you like it when I do this Hana-san…?” He was being so mean, wanting me to answer to that… “Don… hahh…ask those….ahah…” “But I’ll ask, every time, I want to know what makes you feel good…” “Everything….ha ha …everything…so good…. so good…” “Can I move now Hana-san…?! (kiss)” “Yeah…ha ha, please now…” “Do you desire me Hana-san…?(grin) Say you want me to make you come, I want to listen to you saying it…saying that you love me…” “Please, Mina don’t do…há…ha…há…” “Please, (whisper) say it to me, say it…” “…Ha…make me come…please, i…ha… ha…I want you…so much… so much…” It was enough for me to have by my side, but for him to love me like this, I started to think, I didn’t deserve so much…He was the biggest gift I could have received, I was blesses being able to be beside him… I hold him close to me, and whispered… “I love you…” I placed his head in my hands… “I love you too much…for my sake(smile)" The smile of happiness he gave me was enough, but he satisfied me even more, pleasuring me so much more with every thrust he gave… Feeling him inside me was the best thing i ever felt, i wanted to keep him there, loving me, safe, within my reach... We fell asleep hugging each other again…It was good, but the temperature could reach frightening numbers… I woke in the middle of the night, dead thirsty… I grabbed a bottle of water and retuned to bed… He was sleeping peaceful, so cute…So perfect… My life now has taken a turn for the worse… There’s no way I could live in this earth without this man anymore… I touched a small strand of his hair, and kissed it… “How could you do this sort of thing to me, in such a small amount of time…I become completely yours, hope you get that, and I hope you take care of me… Because I love you…” I turned to my side so I could get some sleep, till I heard him whisper… “I love you too…” I blushed, I didn’t thought he heard me… But I took the chance and told him… “Mina-san…Tomorrow, we have to talk.” ________________________________________________________________________ Hope you guys liked it... Thank you, always, for the suport... Big kiss f'o ya :leaf3: 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted August 1, 2011 Share Posted August 1, 2011 Oh so hot! I'm still wandering.. can I have an uke like him? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted August 1, 2011 Author Share Posted August 1, 2011 Arigatou sweetie :* Thanks for reading once again 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 Dear Belita, I can't wait for cap.6, it'sso interesting. I like your story a lot, I've got a lot to learn... Great job! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted August 3, 2011 Share Posted August 3, 2011 The story it's very good! For some reason, I like the best the chapters from Spoilers :leaf4: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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