nachii Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 This was written some time ago,but here ya go.This poem is about bullying.Hope you like it! The rain stops But the pain is still the same Can you,please,not mock? It's not funny going insane It's a disease It's a hell Please Just drop that bombshell Hair covering eyes Arms covering knees I'm like this,disguised Would you stop the mocking,please? Bruises painted on the skin Things that you made With a big grin On your face I feel like crap I wish I was brave Enough to snap But I'm just your slave I'm your damn slave I'm tired of living a lie Words written on my grave Goodbye 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bamba Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 nachii.. if you weren't bullied then you have quite the imagination if you did then you have my giant bones crushing hug. its a beautiful song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nachii Posted July 20, 2011 Author Share Posted July 20, 2011 nachii.. if you weren't bullied then you have quite the imagination if you did then you have my giant bones crushing hug. its a beautiful song thank you! well fortunately I've never been bullied but some of my friends been and it hurts when you can't do almost anything to help them,it's quite sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 Very touching! This is my favorite part: "Hair covering eyes Arms covering knees I'm like this,disguised Would you stop the mocking,please?" And by the way.. I'd really punch the ones bullied your friend! >_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted July 20, 2011 Share Posted July 20, 2011 I like your poem a lot! And I agree with Matti, I'll totally kick thous bastards! :hamtaro-005 (6): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nachii Posted July 21, 2011 Author Share Posted July 21, 2011 thanks a lot guys! I was kinda nervous 'cause I never showed any of my poems to anyone and I'm glad to hear your feedback!Specially in such a delicate themed poem...I really wished bullies would at least stop and think what they're doing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 Wow Nachii, that was a nice poem all the feelings and emotions expressed by your words. I agree, why are there ppl out there who feel the only way to make themselves feel or look better is to cut someone else down? Are they that insecure with themselves? Bullying is not the answer. Hope you continue to share your talent by posting more of your works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted July 27, 2011 Share Posted July 27, 2011 Great poem Nachii... I loved it... The pain, show's so well in your words... Bullying sucks, it truly does Big kiss f'o ya :* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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