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No Doubt (I look into)


Ueda_Angel
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It starts with a look

A touch of a hand

A gentle gesture

 

You look into my eyes

I see no doubt that you want me

 

I reach for your face

Caressing you petal soft skin

Your kisses begin

 

I look into your mind

I see no doubt that you love me

 

You reach for my shirt

The fabric is a barrier

You want to see more of me

 

I look into your heart

I see no doubt that you need me.

 

I stop your hand

I hold you close

I want to wait for the right time

 

I look into your soul

I see no doubt that you'll wait with me

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ooooh! I like it!

i'm such a fan of poetry in fluid-like motion and this one has it.

i love how it flows with just the right amount of intensity and simplicity.

very good! :)

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I hope I didn't ruin your poem... --;;

I thought about using 2rd Takumi-kun love scene for this...

Then... I change to this... I hope you like it... ^^;;;

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I hope I didn't ruin your poem... --;;

I thought about using 2rd Takumi-kun love scene for this...

Then... I change to this... I hope you like it... ^^;;;

 

I loved this except for one tiny detail...you spelled my name wrong you put 'angle' instead of 'angel' lol. Otherwise thank you for this. I'm honored you would do this for my poetry.

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I loved this except for one tiny detail...you spelled my name wrong you put 'angle' instead of 'angel' lol. Otherwise thank you for this. I'm honored you would do this for my poetry.

 

I am trying to fix all the name right now...

I was put in wrong name in the my file... --;;;

I did all wrong... T T

I am really sorry!!!

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