Ueda_Angel Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 It seems like months or even years Since I last saw your smile. I never thought I'd miss this much The wait has been worth while. I see you standing on the train A few feet from my arms. You look in to my tear filed eyes. And dazzle me with your charm. You walk to me mouth smiling While you locate my own. You cannot wait until we leave Until we are alone. The passerbys all stop to stare Can't seem to understand How such a touching unity Is shared by two grown men. I break the kiss and look at you. I see it in on your face. You have just one thought on your mind Let's continue at my place. 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 thank you very much, it's a very beautiful poem, you are very beautiful poem. It's true when I say it made me cry, keep pong please. I enjoyed it very very much Thanks a million the sweetest kiss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginger Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted September 14, 2011 Share Posted September 14, 2011 Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 I still have this pain in my stomach... --;;; I just want to do this... I hope Ueda_Angel and BRIDGET like this... ^^ I use Takumi-kun manga Pure 2... ^^ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rotten boy Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 It is a lovely poem thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 I still have this pain in my stomach... --;;; I just want to do this... I hope Ueda_Angel and BRIDGET like this... ^^ I use Takumi-kun manga Pure 2... ^^ I just love it! very touching! I hope you recover soon! thanks a lot hama71 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 I just love it! very touching! I hope you recover soon! thanks a lot hama71 I am glad you like it.. Well this time... I need more rest then before... Sorry to make you guys worry... T T You're welcome! Enjoy your poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 15, 2011 Author Share Posted September 15, 2011 I am glad you like it.. Well this time... I need more rest then before... Sorry to make you guys worry... T T You're welcome! Enjoy your poem! Scary thing is I had that couple in my head when I was writing the poem. Weird huh? Arigatou Hama71 for doing such a great job sprucing up my poem. I'm glad you guys think they're good enough to be used for a piece of work like that. Hopefully more poems to come if I get over this stupid writer's block completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chiakaiyuki Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 Really beautiful You should take more pride in your work, because it's fantastic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Macys Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 So beautiful! I really loved this poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 Scary thing is I had that couple in my head when I was writing the poem. Weird huh? Arigatou Hama71 for doing such a great job sprucing up my poem. I'm glad you guys think they're good enough to be used for a piece of work like that. Hopefully more poems to come if I get over this stupid writer's block completely. Well I thought about it... there was other one too but, I think you might had this image in your mine... I am just glad you like the way I put it... I just hope you get over that writer's block soon... And I just hope I get better soon too... --;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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