Ueda_Angel Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Our eyes connect as do our souls But you still look away My vision fades as tears build up I'm forced to look away I'm asked if everything's all right I cannot find the the words You tell the person 'I'll handle this' And make sure he's assured. I'm scared that I have screwed things up Before they could begin. Still I can't help but confess to you. With your patience running thin. You tell me I should leave the school. My chances are too slim Why did I bother coming here My life is just too grim You promise me your own first name If I can make it in. I tell myself I'll do my best And then my life will begin. I still remember that first time You took my favorite bit. I told you it was my last one You claimed that I could have it. At first I didn't what you planned Until pulled my tie and then I felt your lips on mine Our tongues had intertwined. As I pulled back I moved a head My arms acting their own. "I love you Arata-san" Since the very beginning you've known. I keep my distance but stay close I want to stay by your side But when you claim I bother you My pain I'm sure to hide. You overworked yourself again. I saw you nearly fade Although I tried to help out out. You claimed you were okay I asked you if you wouldn't mind to keep your promise true a day for just the two of us. A day for me and you. You tell me you have other plans Perhaps another day I claim that I can wait some more And push my thoughts away On the day that you collapsed I couldn't come to your aid. There'd be no point It told myself I'd just cause you more pain. You stopped me in the corridor Some free time has come through. You say that you came keep you word I cannot go with you. But when I saw that one day While sitting with that guy I couldn't find the strength to stay Or keep from wanting to cry I try to run to get away You stop me with this claim 'You are possession Shingyoshi.' Nothing will never be the same. You take me to the clothing shop And pick out something new "Try these on' you say to me I obey what else can I do? Before I know what's happening I feel your arms intertwined. You turn me saying I can't throw you away I never had that thought in mind. You say that I am like your pet I belong right by your side No longer can I hold myself back In your arms try to hide. "Go on a date with me' you say I can't believe my ears I never thought I'd hear those words That was one of my fears Perhaps I have misunderstood I question what was said. But when you ask if it's a no go. I firmly shake my head I want to more than anything I tell you loud and clear And follow with those simple words I just want you to hear You answer with a new response Your lips then locate mine. The kiss is better then the first. I think I've lost my mind. But to this day I still think back To how it all begun The words I said that started it all. "I love you Arata-san" (the part about the bit is the type of chocolate they use in the movie thanks to hama71 for the info in the Takumi-kun fanclub) 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginger Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 This is fantastic!!! Thank you so much. A poem about my favorite BL couple. Thank you thank you thank you :leaf3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 wuaaahhhh!!!! love it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 first allow me to thank you so much for dedicating this to me. i feel like Misu right now. hahahahah! *hugs tight* i love the poem because you encapsulated almost the entire MisuShin scenes from Pure in this poem alone. it's really good. i love the choice of words and the emotions. it's something Shingyouji would say. ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 I don't know... I am totally out of myself now... I don't know I did good job or not... I just did it... I am dead sick... I know that... But, somehow I feel like I had to do this... Becaues, it for two person I like most... Ueda_Angel(Tat-chan) write for Yojichan(who is close to me-I am only one think that??)... So here... Sorry... I am totally out of myself... I just hope you two like this... Then I am off to rest again... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panda16 Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Compliments is beautiful :leaf12: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 16, 2011 Author Share Posted September 16, 2011 Wow guys. I didn't think you all would like it that much! I'm literally shocked! I really don't know how I managed to write that to be honest. And believe it or not I wrote it after watching the movie only twice and I had no reference while I wrote it. I'd do one for Takabayashi and or Yoshizawa but I'm still learning about their characters. Maybe one for Takumi and Gii too but I'm not too sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 Wow guys. I didn't think you all would like it that much! I'm literally shocked! I really don't know how I managed to write that to be honest. And believe it or not I wrote it after watching the movie only twice and I had no reference while I wrote it. I'd do one for Takabayashi and or Yoshizawa but I'm still learning about their characters. Maybe one for Takumi and Gii too but I'm not too sure. As I always saying... You are good writer! Get more faith in you! It's feeling you have that show in your poem... I do write better when I am in full of motion... So how many time you see or read doesn't matter... Matter is how much you feel about it... I think that is show in the poem... Only when I was doing that i was totally out of myself... So I don't know I did right or not... I was so sick and it took too long to finish... I just didn't think twice just post here... I am sorry... T T So, give yourself for credit... Your need that to get your writer's block... Believe in yourself... You can do it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 17, 2011 Author Share Posted September 17, 2011 That does mean a whole lot to me. It really does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 That does mean a whole lot to me. It really does. Well, it is true! You just need little reminder on it that all... ^^ I think you know just time to time every artist, writer, musician any kind of creative work do get this up and down... Just long as you believe in you and people around you keep remind you... you will get back in track soon... ^^ So keep up don't stop... like I did... --;;;;; I have other reason to stop any way... But, I hope you don't have that... ^^;;; My problem is more in physical... T T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 17, 2011 Author Share Posted September 17, 2011 If you can't do much do what you can. But don't strain yourself. If you want to be creative then by all means go for it but don't pressure yourself. You give us so much info and are so understanding. I can't speak for others but I can easily and freely say I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 If you can't do much do what you can. But don't strain yourself. If you want to be creative then by all means go for it but don't pressure yourself. You give us so much info and are so understanding. I can't speak for others but I can easily and freely say I appreciate it. Well, this is one of my bad habit... I can't control myself... --;;; If I have feeling to do something I alway over done it... and hurt myself... I said to myself so many time but still doing samething over and over... --;;; For that I did had to stop doing a lot of thing... but, I am not totally give up on that... I will do it again some day... I hope... ^^;;; So, I want you to not give up and keep up your good work... I know you can do it! I have faith in you! and I know you do have that in you... you just need little push... I think! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 I don't know... I am totally out of myself now... I don't know I did good job or not... I just did it... I am dead sick... I know that... But, somehow I feel like I had to do this... Becaues, it for two person I like most... Ueda_Angel(Tat-chan) write for Yojichan(who is close to me-I am only one think that??)... So here... Sorry... I am totally out of myself... I just hope you two like this... Then I am off to rest again... i think it's beautiful, hama-san! i really like what you did. since the poem is about the entire Pure, so the images you chose for them really fits. like a movie reel. very good! and the feeling is mutual. i do feel close to you too. you're like my oneechan. i look up to you. i always wanted to have a big sister. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 i think it's beautiful, hama-san! i really like what you did. since the poem is about the entire Pure, so the images you chose for them really fits. like a movie reel. very good! and the feeling is mutual. i do feel close to you too. you're like my oneechan. i look up to you. i always wanted to have a big sister. That's good to hear... I was really not in myself and that took too long to do I just feel not knowing what I am doing any more... --;;; Long as you and Tat-chan like it that is all it matter to me... ^^ I am glad you feel me as big sister! Thank you! I guess I have to keep up not to make you dispoint on me... ^^ Now it time for me to get rest... My arms and hands and fingers are getting out of it... --;; So have a great weekend! ^^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 17, 2011 Author Share Posted September 17, 2011 Rest all that you need hama71 you deserve it. I'll be sure to let you know if I post up any more poems that way if you want to put images to them you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 Rest all that you need hama71 you deserve it. I'll be sure to let you know if I post up any more poems that way if you want to put images to them you can. I wish I could... the other problem come along with what I have already make harder for me to even sleep... --;; I want to sleep... I just hope this one get better sooner or I will not get any rest at all... T T Any way... I will try keep up with your work... even I am dead sick... ^^;;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 17, 2011 Author Share Posted September 17, 2011 Hama-chan go at your own pace. You don't need to try to keep up with me. I will worry if you do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 Hama-chan go at your own pace. You don't need to try to keep up with me. I will worry if you do. Even I said that but if I am dead sick I can even move so don't worry about it... Well now I really have to go back to rest... See you later! Thank you! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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