Saga Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Life might be bad, I might be mad, but I am going on my own "I road". You who knew how to smile at me made me believe in my existence. You who knew how to cry made me realize my existence. You , now, who are you? I might be sad, You might be glad, but let's meet again in the end of my "I road". The gentleness of these cold snowflakes, ah, how my heart begs Fingertips that does not know how to caress, I am reaching out for you. Yes,yes - Let's meet again. I haven't showed you anything yet. Will you smile at the current me? These thoughts run through my conscious, spiraling around my breathe like thorns - What can I do? Life might be bad, I might be mad, but I am going on my own "I road". Do you remember the wind playing with our hairs? You were laughing at my silly face and this feeling in me...."Ah, this is it, our farewell." I smiled for last time, but you didn't realize it. I might be sad, You might be glad, but let's meet again in the end of my "I road". Let me show you how great I can be for you to regret, my dear friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 :X :X Sad..and In the same time so beautiful :X Hahaha,I feel many feelings in the poem,am I right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 18, 2011 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Indeed,my bud. (: This is my 'I road'. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 A,so. Interesting ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 Very beautiful your poem! I like it a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 18, 2011 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 Thank you, Aoi. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 I did with out asking you for it... But, I thought this poem will go well with this background... This is from Nana fan site... I hope you like it... ^^ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 18, 2011 Author Share Posted September 18, 2011 It's beautiful. (: I don't mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GPelka Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 @ Saga : So beautiful... I like it.... It reminded me something and.... You have to give me a box of tissues.. :|... loll @ Hama71 : I like the image you chose.. PERFECT !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAO(H)I_lover Posted September 18, 2011 Share Posted September 18, 2011 I like it a lot! A very beautiful poem...and somehow I can relate to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 19, 2011 Author Share Posted September 19, 2011 @GPelka - Ah, I am glad you liked it,sweetness. (: @YAO(H)I_lover - Thank you! (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 A lot of feelings poured in there... I loved it... Congratts it's great...Really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panda16 Posted October 2, 2011 Share Posted October 2, 2011 sad poem but I like the sad poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted October 2, 2011 Share Posted October 2, 2011 Very beautiful! Awesome poem! In fact I loved both the poem and the way Hama chose the pic... it matches so well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted October 2, 2011 Author Share Posted October 2, 2011 Yes, they do. Thank you,Rei. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted October 2, 2011 Share Posted October 2, 2011 But, I thought this poem will go well with this background... This is from Nana fan site... I hope you like it... ^^ You're always doing so great things with these guys poems! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted October 2, 2011 Share Posted October 2, 2011 Awesome! I liked it very much, bitter but with a bit of hope for the speaker, I like the refrain & the way you alternate words with similar sounds, I also like the distribution of the stanzas . I like the most these two verses "Will you smile at the current me? These thoughts run through my conscious," I wonder that a lot too Congrats, really, I liked it very much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted October 2, 2011 Author Share Posted October 2, 2011 I guess, these,who can feel literature and these born with the talent to feel the art can tell, there is a hope in the bitterness. (: Thank you,dear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted October 2, 2011 Share Posted October 2, 2011 I guess, these,who can feel literature and these born with the talent to feel the art can tell, there is a hope in the bitterness. (: Thank you,dear. Really beautiful, I think bitterness is sth that makes us feel alive as well as hope.... Thanks to you for this piece.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 Some of the best poetry can be thought up and created when emotions or feelings are at its highest peak. A reader can almost "feel" what the author was experiencing at the moment. Powerful expressions of words Saga, hope you continue to share with us more of your masterpieces. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rotten boy Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 LOve the poem realy is sad but happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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