Saga Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Whisper in the night your eyes are right this is not the moon's light. And you should know I do not bow and you should know it's because you'll beg right in a row. Whisper in the night your eyes are right this is not the moon's light. If this nightmare doesn't end for me,for you what would be behind ah,don't hide - you do bite. In a world where you cannot talk In a world where you should be bold I know, your mind just broke. Whisper in the night your eyes are right this is not the moon's light. You are a hypocrite What do you think is pit? And when you become a myth, tell me again the world is not a hypocrite. Whisper in the night your eyes are right this is not the moon's light. My last words be this man who struggle the most because in my hypocrisy you'd never find a mercy. Ah, you were right I am just called a "Fight". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 I like this poem a lot! Not to mention that the last part is just brilliant in my oppinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 20, 2011 Author Share Posted September 20, 2011 I am glad you liked it,Aoi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 i like ur poem...this is so my fav type of poems...well done...^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 20, 2011 Author Share Posted September 20, 2011 Thank you,sky. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Very very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 20, 2011 Author Share Posted September 20, 2011 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 I found it powerful & with a good rhythm. I'm reading more poetry here than in my degree! I enjoyed talking to you Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted September 20, 2011 Author Share Posted September 20, 2011 Thank you,Bridget! I enjoyed talking to you as well. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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