Ueda_Angel Posted October 12, 2011 Share Posted October 12, 2011 Fading out with dark desire Dreams have come and dreams have gone Dousing out the soul’s black fire Everything goes right to wrong. Broken bandage broken heart Makes me wonder why we try. Should have seen it from the start All this time you’ve lived a lie. I don’t know what I’m supposed to do I can’t sop the searing pain Since the day that I met you What I lose you seem to gain. Fading out with dark desire Bloody tears stream down my face Every sin will take me higher Someone take me from this place Broken spirt broken dreams Makes me think that it’s too late Nothing’s ever what it seems Could it be we sealed our fate 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted October 12, 2011 Share Posted October 12, 2011 wow..i love this type of poem...really gives me a goosebumps... LOVE it...great job..^o^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted October 12, 2011 Share Posted October 12, 2011 Sorry... I feel not right on this... but, I try... I hope you like it... 1st one is from manga 'End Game'... 2nd one is from DJ art by Hisaya Nakajo... 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 personally, i love the first image done by hama-san. i like the mood of that one. i like how lyrical the poem is, tat-chan. you've done a splendid job. kudos to you! my favorite line will have to be: "Since the day I met you What I lose you seem to gain." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted October 20, 2011 Share Posted October 20, 2011 I love the poem a lot! So good, just like all your other poems! This was my favorite part: 'Broken bandage broken heart Makes me wonder why we try. Should have seen it from the start All this time you’ve lived a lie.' Awesome! And, like yojichan, I also like the first image Hama chose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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