Saga Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 I am standing here again, staring at your back for the truth's sake. Your eyes are afraid to look at me, why we came to that? I find myself in a disappointment, I bathe myself in the bitterness, I shoot for my happiness. Frozen,I chose to be, hated - I never was, but you disappoint me to a hating point,my dear loss I find myself in this white land, where my clothes went to? I find myself in this grave, what my warmth went for ? What hurts the most ain't love, what hurts the most is the expectation you never received. What hurts me the most is you, you,who never made me feel this loss. Disappointed I go on to this cold point, where my mind got caged by the sky, where my feelings became petals, where you don't exist....my beautiful loss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swordfish0714 Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 Nice poetry you got but has a bit of melancholy... Feeling blue today? Hope your okay.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 (: Well, I took out my disappointment in this.....whatever it is,so I am better. (; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 The poem is great... Dark...Sad... But loved it *hug* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swordfish0714 Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 At least you've got something to release it... Here to make you even happier.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 Thank you for liking it. (: Just had a moment of...anger+disappointment and wrote this down. EDIT: LOL! Silly,shy boy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cherryyuri Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 great one, saga! well, im glad it helped you to feel better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 What is this poem? a break ? you break the rhythm, dear with the longest verses... tell me why? show you to me.... Disappointment? I feel little bit of pain, more than anger and a bit of sorrow Bear it dear, we are humans,as you like to say, and as humans we fail. Not very good analysis this time, ne?? maybe I feel disappointed too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 Don't be disappointed,because you darted it down;without analysis you did well. (: What analysis a disappointment needs? - None, it's a bare fact,already done and felt,after a break. True, you sensed the break through my broken rhythm. ; ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 Don't be disappointed,because you darted it down;without analysis you did well. (: What analysis a disappointment needs? - None, it's a bare fact,already done and felt,after a break. True, you sensed the break through my broken rhythm. ; ) Not disappointed by my analysis or your poem, I could never be, Saga & you know that.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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