BRIDGET Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 Summary: A statement of intent: I'm always here, loving and caring for you. Status: Complete I feel my hand on your cold arm. The cold touch of your skin reminds me how scare I was of you, of your iced breath. But I wanted to see your heart and discover you, even if that meant you’d hate me some day, I wanted to see that orange world inside you.. My footprints on the wet sand, remember the person I was before I met you. The cold waves dying in my feet erase words, pain, wishes and tears, leaving the storm behind, leaving a heart buried in pure foam. The gray sky looks for the gray sea reflected on our eyes, they meet at the skyline, in a mutual feeling and the gentle breeze after the storm brings a new smell, never felt before, never dreamt before. I want you to feel this, the flame in me, the love in me. I just want to erase all your doubts with the weak flame still burning in me, this purple flame that fights to burn strongly again. My other hand holds tightly the lighter in my pocket you once gave me, trying to hold the need to tell you all the words crowded on my head, on my heart. But my clumsy side doesn’t know how to put them in order and I just use all my strength to drag you near me. My only aim tonight is to make you feel my warm body next to you. I whisper at your ear: No matter what, I’m here, please, feel my warmth, don’t doubt me, let me in…… I told you I love this song 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 One word - Beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 thanks still under the effects of that wine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swordfish0714 Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 Amazingly good and classy like you... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 thanks still under the effects of that wine? Ahaha,no,I am sober. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 Ahaha,no,I am sober. (: then call me.. juas juas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share Posted November 4, 2011 Amazingly good and classy like you... thanks Dennis, but not that good, me classy??? hahahahaha I was just an image and a wish put into words... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swordfish0714 Posted November 4, 2011 Share Posted November 4, 2011 Hey Wonderful Bridget... You deserve to be called one... Nice writing though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 5, 2011 Share Posted November 5, 2011 It has such a nice feeling to it *__* Bridge this feels like a start of a romance novel... So lovely... Don't you want to continue it? You already know i'm a sucker for romance XD And this is just perfect.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 5, 2011 Author Share Posted November 5, 2011 It has such a nice feeling to it *__* Bridge this feels like a start of a romance novel... So lovely... Don't you want to continue it? You already know i'm a sucker for romance XD And this is just perfect.... hahaha, Bel dear thanks I feel flattered, but I'm not that good. Besides, this was just sth I needed to say to someone.... I suck at long stories, so from time to time let's leave it in a short one... Big kiss to you for your kind words.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rotten boy Posted November 6, 2011 Share Posted November 6, 2011 I like it I too would love to walk on the beach with a lover and have those kind of feelings. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 6, 2011 Author Share Posted November 6, 2011 I like it I too would love to walk on the beach with a lover and have those kind of feelings. Thanks RB, for reading it & being always so kind to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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