Bloodysadist Posted November 6, 2011 Share Posted November 6, 2011 (Uh...its my first time trying to write something like that in English..So..I'm sorry if its not good..or..there have mistakes..) Looking at the closed window, what do you see? The dark sky at the night? Or the moon,but without the light? Wanna tell me these hurtful words again? "I don't love you,I'm sorry","I will leave you,can you forgive me?" Wasn't that enough? My heart is already broken on pieces. I can't see the light on the end of the tunnel. I can't hear my own breath. Am I alive? I'm asking you,AM I ALIVE? You are happy now, with your new life,don't even remembering that, one year ago,you leaved this empty soul. But I'll come back. Yeah,you heard me! I'll come back, to show you that I'm alive. I'll say you like you did, "I'm sorry,but I can't stand you now" "I don't care,for your new life" "I hate you" will be my last words. 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 Beautiful poem, Bloody, full of feelings. It seems that we share a lot of things ne?? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cherryyuri Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 such a talented baby student! =] 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 7, 2011 Author Share Posted November 7, 2011 @Bridget:Thank you dear...^^ Uh,yeah..sharing a lot of things...Indeed XD @Cherry: Aw,thank you Cherry-chan.. ^^'' But...I'm not that good...XDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rotten boy Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 HI Bloody Love the poem. Kind the way I felt with my ex. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 7, 2011 Author Share Posted November 7, 2011 @Rotten boy Ah...thank you,for reading it XDDD And...believe me I can understand what do you mean ^^'' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 Is this really your first time?! O_o It's great...really doesn't look like it *__* It's really good Bloody 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 7, 2011 Author Share Posted November 7, 2011 Bela: Uh..well I tried once before O-o I think..but dunnoh...I'm just worry about my English...So I don't usually write something like this one XD Thank you dear,really~ ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 The poem is so beatiful! leaf4 Hope you'll write other poems as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 I like your poem, even if it's sad. We are waiting for a happy poem as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 8, 2011 Author Share Posted November 8, 2011 @Miro Thank you dear ^^'' I promise I'll write something when I have muse XD @Matti Heh,cutie I'll try to write something happy and sweet special for you : P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Mitsukuni~ Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 Your English is great Bloody!, that was a really nice poem ^^ please make more. :hamtaro-005 (23): 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAO(H)I_lover Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 You're amazing! I really liked it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 13, 2011 Author Share Posted November 13, 2011 Thank you Mitsu and Yaoi(H)I_lover ^_^ I'm glad that you liked it : P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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