Bloodysadist Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 I'm dancing,dancing,dancing under the rain, feeling as free as the stars on the sky. I know that,I can fly now, without even thinking that I'll fall. The rain is wetting my hair. Ah this touch is as soft as your hand. Stepping on the ground is good, but looking at the sky, makes me feel so free, like there is an angel, who is letting me to fly. Yeah,that's what I want, one look,one touch and I already know that is the freedom, which everyone is searching on the ground, but no one know that it's here, on the sky. (Well,like I promised..I tried to write something not so sad O-o Oh and yeah...its special..for Baby Face,who wanted something happy...Hope that you dear and everyone who will read it,will like it ^^) 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phong Y Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 very nice !! I like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 Very beautiful! A happy poem suits you way better. You're talented and you should definitely write more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 @ Phong Y Hehe,glad that you like it,dear ^0^ @Matti Nah,I tried my best to write something more happily..XDD But...Its more difficult than a sad one..XDDD Never mind,I'm so happy that you like it,sweetie : P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 10, 2011 Share Posted November 10, 2011 Aww Bloody, it's so beautiful. I like the first stanza, it's such a beautiful image. I think we should share more dear. Think you & I have tons of things in common.... Very well done, really.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 10, 2011 Author Share Posted November 10, 2011 Aw,Bridge...you can't imagine how happy you make me feel..I mean...that you likes my...poems XDD Mm,you're damn right,hehe! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 10, 2011 Share Posted November 10, 2011 We got a revelation writer here!! Very very good Bloody... *__* Yeah,that's what I want, one look,one touch and I already know that is the freedom, which everyone is searching on the ground, but no one know that it's here, on the sky. Definitely, definitely, my fav part... *__* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 13, 2011 Author Share Posted November 13, 2011 Ahahaha Bela ^^'' Thank you,really :X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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