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Bloodysadist
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I'm dancing,dancing,dancing under the rain,

feeling as free as the stars on the sky.

I know that,I can fly now,

without even thinking that I'll fall.

 

The rain is wetting my hair.

Ah this touch is as soft as your hand.

Stepping on the ground is good,

but looking at the sky,

makes me feel so free,

like there is an angel,

who is letting me to fly.

 

Yeah,that's what I want,

one look,one touch

and I already know

that is the freedom,

which everyone is searching on the ground,

but no one know that it's here,

on the sky.

 

(Well,like I promised..I tried to write something not so sad O-o Oh and yeah...its special..for Baby Face,who wanted something happy...Hope that you dear and everyone who will read it,will like it ^^)

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@ Phong Y Hehe,glad that you like it,dear ^0^

 

@Matti Nah,I tried my best to write something more happily..XDD But...Its more difficult than a sad one..XDDD Never mind,I'm so happy that you like it,sweetie : P

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Aww Bloody, it's so beautiful. I like the first stanza, it's such a beautiful image. I think we should share more dear. Think you & I have tons of things in common.... Very well done, really....

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We got a revelation writer here!!

Very very good Bloody... *__*

 

 

Yeah,that's what I want,

one look,one touch

and I already know

that is the freedom,

which everyone is searching on the ground,

but no one know that it's here,

on the sky.

 

Definitely, definitely, my fav part... *__*

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