Saga Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 Purple sheets in this pure winter night. All crumpled around our warm bodies-an embrace of desire,they are. Your hair tangled in my cold fingers,such a coward way of love; your hands laying still on my hips,such an eager taste for the poison. Mouth asking for more, my tongue willing for more,ready to speak the words I held back for too long. Our bodies on fire,please don't stop, engrave the flame in my heart. I feel your finger,again there,tracing my lips. Following the line of my neck,be my legend,leave your secrets on me. I look into your deep eyes and smile at your world because only I can see it - Don't let me be lost in you,even if I beg. Bite my lip,make the dream real. Your warm hand stops right there, where the path of my pleasure begins. I want you to see my face,the real me,yet.... I want to see your face,put the mask down. I want to hear your moans - but yet,listen to lips that whisper only your name. And you adjust yourself to the center of my world of pleasure,caressing your face, a lick of your lips I stole - what a wonderful trace on your neck,what a wonderful move you just made. And now your wish for a never ending night-it's my moon stage, where I found my footprints dancing on the desire of feeling your warmth deep inside. Our bodies - what a sinful taste you made me dance upon. The final act arrives- is it a goodbye? My fingers are tangled in your hair, while your warm hand is laying on my heart - Tell me.....did you steal it? ------------------------------------------------- Main Idea - Bridget Story - Bridget and Saga Editor - Saga Name and Title's owner - Bridget Photoshop edit: Saga Credits - Bridget (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 My dear Saga, I don't give a damn anymore. I'll tell you this just once: I LOVE YOU. I don't deserve the credits. You transformed a mediocre thing into one of the most beautiful things I've ever read( & I've read a lot). Thanks, for doing it for me, for letting me win this one. I'm not gonna get tired of telling the world, the great talent you have for everything you touch: words, pictures, songs, ppl, hearts... I 'm gonna have to thank God for once in my life, dear. And to you, for making me happy... And now run away, blame me or whatever. As I told you... I don't give a damn anymore 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 12, 2011 Author Share Posted November 12, 2011 Ahahaha! We are awesome, dear, we are! Thank you and I should thank you too! And one thing I want to say - The sky without stars is beautiful,yes. But no one knows how lonely the moon is without the stars. ( ; Don't you ever call your idea " a mediocre thing", it was the sky with the beautiful moon, I just added the stars. ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 Thanks, for inventing a world for just the two of us..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swordfish0714 Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 Well-done guys.... It takes talents to do such impeccable writing and you both are talented... Nice! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 It's definitely an amazing thing letting you guys hang around with each other... XD If things like this are often born from your mutual "amazingness"(i know this shit probably doesn't exist, just cut me some slack) then we should be much apreciated to you guys for creating things like the example above... Two words... Just Fabulous! *bows* Congrats :** 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 @Dennis... Thanks, Glad you liked it @Bel... all the merits go to Saga, Saga's brain & talent really amaze me. I just said yes, yes, yes to all Saga's proposals.... But I'm glad you liked it..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted November 12, 2011 Author Share Posted November 12, 2011 @ Bel Thank you,dear. I am glad and smiled for real when I read your comment. @Bridget Being humble? ;P It was born because you had the idea,stop making be stubborn for how many times I repeated myself. >[ XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 OMG! Its so beautiful..and real...You can imagine the scene,which is so real :X :X Really good job Saga and Bridge ^_^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 12, 2011 Share Posted November 12, 2011 Thanks honey, but once more ( & yeah Saga I'm f** stubborn) Saga was the one to come up with it.... Anyway I had a great time & that's enough.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDjinn53 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 @ Saga & Bridget Love it - after reading a few of each of your pieces I can see how you would work well together, poetically speaking. Makes me think we should start a poetry "theme" thread, or would that be to much like school? Anyway, well done! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted March 22, 2012 Author Share Posted March 22, 2012 D², I liked your idea. ;D We should,indeed. I like your poems as well. Thank you! (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 @ DarkDjinn53 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. It's a very special poem to me for several reasons so I'm really glad you liked it.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 Collaboration can really create beautiful magic. Brilliant work (= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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