Bloodysadist Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 Seeing the drops on the window is so nostalgic, like I'm seeing the tears in your eyes. These rainy days, they could be so romantic, but for me they are the thing that make me cry. Remembering our first meet, like it was yesterday. This happy face which you made, like you was a child, like you didn't know, how painful this world could be, how much pain could you feel, seeing the reality, the reality which you thought was a nightmare, the reality which separated us for ever. Ah that innocent and pure eyes, searching for a new life, thinking that everything is like in a fairytale. But yeah,you're other person now. Your pureness disappeared with my betrayal, with the stupidly mistake which I made, the mistake that made us break up. Ah these rainy days are so beautiful, but it would be better, if they didn't sound so sad. It would be better if I didn't cry now. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 Very beautiful. This was my favorite part: Seeing the drops on the window so nostalgic, like I'm seeing the tears in your eyes. A sad but beautiful poem... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Mitsukuni~ Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 that's a lovely poem bloody, it was very touching.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 30, 2011 Author Share Posted November 30, 2011 @Aoi,Mitsu Thank you ^_^ Glad you liked it : P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 I also like it. Sad but beautiful. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 30, 2011 Author Share Posted November 30, 2011 @Kaoru Chan: Thank you,dear ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 Beautiful poem, like the others said. Another sad poem but I have to recognize that is very well done.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 30, 2011 Author Share Posted November 30, 2011 @Matti Heh (= Thank you..really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 *hugs tightly* Bloody, dear girl, it's a very beautiful poem... gray colors in it.... very sad but full of feelings. You're improving a lot. Well done dear... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted November 30, 2011 Author Share Posted November 30, 2011 @Bridget : -chuckles,hugging back- Ah,I don't know what to say Bridge...Thank you? For the warm words (= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAO(H)I_lover Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 Very touching! I really liked it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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