tasteofink Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 Flowers and tainted blood,mixed with Suppressed love It makes me feel used,it makes me feel abused. I scream out in the darkest light. To make thing right,it tears apart,causes decay. I try to run but stopped by this chain It's all the same,it won't go away. Now there's only one way out Death is what I gain. The knife hugs my throat. Preparing for the slide,the blood runs down the with nothing to hide. This is what I wanted,this is what I get Silence is Deaths reward... Thank you Asta for helping me name this n.n foxy3:Red_fox7: 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasuku Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 Its a nice poem/composition.... I'm no good with titles either..so...I'm sure you can decide the name of your composition...XD 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAO(H)I_lover Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 I like it...You really have talent 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asta Posted December 27, 2011 Share Posted December 27, 2011 There's this little chill that runs down my spine when I read what you have written. There's something there, and it's lovely in a somewhat brutal yet charming way. "Silence is Death's reward." ^Genius, that is 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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