Saga Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 I went through the Hell, but I didn't stop. Just kept walking and walking. My fear soaring up above me, just like a black raven. Waiting for me to give up, myself to give in. Just because I was alone and one. And it was darkness before and inside of me. But I kept walking and walking. Deadly silent voice whispers calling me over there, and I,for a moment, just wished to stop and dream. All tired into the nothingness. Somewhere far away,once, I didn't stop and I kept walking. Everything stops at a point, but I didn't stop. I stood in front of myself, and no path, I had. But I didn't stop,I kept walking. And I am still walking. And on the edge of the end, I kept walking and walking. On the dark side, I kept my mind. I kept counting, years,days and hours. But I didn't know, when did I let the pain inside. Somewhere far away,once, I didn't stop and I kept walking. Everything stops at a point, but I didn't stop. I stood in front of myself, and no path, I had. But I didn't stop,I kept walking. And I am still walking. That,I do have. That, I do not have. That, I lose on my way. That, I have. That,I do not have. And that, I keep discovering again. I went through the Hell, but I didn't stop. Just kept walking and walking. My fear soaring up above me, just like a black raven. Kept staring into my eyes, but I didn't stop. I kept walking and walking. I left it behind,in the nothingness...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasuku Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 Very Nice.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 Thank you. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 nice...like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 Thank you,Hyun Ae. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kisecchi Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 Depressing but yeah liked it. very well done ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 Thank you,Yuu. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 it's alright saga-sama -i think this is not suited here xD- when things are keep falling, and there's nothing you can do but to feel the scattered debris with your full feet naked, how about letting those feet be pricked until it wounded, and when it's bleeding just close your eyes and let your skin do it's HEALING! i just speak my mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 Hope begins in the dark, the stubborn hope that if you just show up and try to do the right thing, the dawn will come. You wait and watch and work: You don't give up. It's very important to walk the dark road and never stop or look back. Thank you for always looking at the front on your dark road....... And it's not depresing... it's encouraging.... but maybe I read things different..... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 @Bridget -> You read it quite well,dear. (: @Cloudy -> True and thank you for speaking your mind. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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