Saga Posted December 29, 2011 Share Posted December 29, 2011 Silver dreams bathed into a crimson sin. Feelings thrown into a bin. What's the use of dreaming, when you keep eyes trapped in your sweet sleeping? Step one, never been so fleeting. Breathes turned into sighs, what could I create except lies? You knocked it down, I just picked it up. You broke it down, please,let me dream before the dawn. Step two,my own flaw. White lotus open, glances stolen, wounds swollen,but pride woken. Step three, forgotten. Voiceless wish, in a lake, like a goldfish, heart skips to punish. Please, let be selfish. Step four, let it banish. Before the fingers let go, memories from long ago. My shattered ego, grabbing onto the arrow of your long forgotten wallow. Step five, do a fucken hallow. And for the typecast, gotta beat this rhyme fast. Heart never been so vast, to let you in and let you B-pass. What a a shame for my Past. Boy, you did a good move for me to surpass. And if you wonder, this is my Sixth step of heart like a sand-blast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted December 29, 2011 Share Posted December 29, 2011 Wow...Without words :X :X It's...hah..just as you said : P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted December 29, 2011 Share Posted December 29, 2011 Oscar Wilde once said.... “A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.” Awesome..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 29, 2011 Author Share Posted December 29, 2011 Thank you,girls. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shirotsuki Posted December 29, 2011 Share Posted December 29, 2011 it is... i can't even describe it... Thank you so much for this moment... i think my soul left my body for a minute there... my congrats! such talent... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 29, 2011 Author Share Posted December 29, 2011 Wow, I am glad you liked it,really. (: Didn't know it can have such an effect. -chuckles- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shirotsuki Posted December 29, 2011 Share Posted December 29, 2011 Art in general has that effect on me... Good art of course! And i really meant what i said! you do have so much talent... keep it up! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicicia Posted December 29, 2011 Share Posted December 29, 2011 Oh my...this is...I think this is actually quite brilliant! I really like it! I usually don't read poems, but I sensed awesomeness coming from this direction, so naturally, I had to investigate. XD Ever so talented, Saga Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted December 29, 2011 Author Share Posted December 29, 2011 Oh my...this is...I think this is actually quite brilliant! I really like it! I usually don't read poems, but I sensed awesomeness coming from this direction, so naturally, I had to investigate. XD Ever so talented, Saga Ahahah,admit that you stalk me. ;D ;D Joking. Thank you very much,Nic. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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