BRIDGET Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 In the solitude of the night, I feel burning fear For desiring things I cannot reach For not being able to arrive at your lips For not being able to speak In the solitude of the night, I feel cold sadness When did appear this anxiousness? When did you make me so blind? When did I leave my true self behind? In the solitude of the night, I wipe few tears Should I have burnt my throat? Should I have kept my oath? Should I leave this asphyxiating atmosphere? In the solitude of the night, I laugh At myself, for still believing At yourself, for silently denying At ourselves, for foolishly lying In the solitude of the night I hide Behind a smile full of pride Trying to erase this delusion Result of a major confusion….. 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted January 9, 2012 Share Posted January 9, 2012 honestly, this is the first time i read a poem in a serious manner and utter it loudly it's not a poem to persuade but it's persuading me to believe ... conveyable 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted January 9, 2012 Share Posted January 9, 2012 Very intense and beautiful! You like someone and you are not sure about that person's feelings? It happened to me as well. I absolutely like your poem! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Takatsu Posted January 9, 2012 Share Posted January 9, 2012 I so love the picture. It heightens the emotions and message of the poem, like I myself is staring at the night sky while pondering at these thoughts. I like it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted January 9, 2012 Share Posted January 9, 2012 *______________* Loved it....! Can't really manage to say much more... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted January 9, 2012 Author Share Posted January 9, 2012 @Cloudy..well.. glad my poem is the first one but all of them must be read in the same way.. thanks @Miro...hehe...well.... the thing is that I know that person's feelings......that's why I laugh at myself first...hahahaha.... @Takatsu.... thanks... for me..the pic.. is.. unable to reach that person.... @Bel.... thanks sweetie.. you always so kind to me..... @ To the rest... thanks for taking your time reading it..... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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