Bloodysadist Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 (Okay...I tried to write something,but...I don't it became as good as I wanted it to be. XD) Steps coming from behind, Strong and manly aroma. Gently touch, Feeling his breath on the neck. A tongue touching the skin. Teeth softly biting this beautiful neck. Mixed feelings. The test of blood and chocolate. Silk quilts, Sweat mixed with blood. The love is all over the room. Every single movement. Every single breath. Every beat of the heart can be heard. This unforgettable night, full with love and passion, fear and desire, everything is so mixed, like their blood tonight. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Mitsukuni~ Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 really nice poem Bloody, i like it lol is it me.. or are you just getting better and better? XDD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Strong poem dear..full of passion ... I liked it a lot, really...to me..on of the best up till now... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted March 24, 2012 Author Share Posted March 24, 2012 @Mitsu better and better on writing or? XDD And I'm really glad that you liked it. ^^ @Bridge Waa so at least it can be felt what I wanted to express? (I mean the passion feeling XD) And thanks for the words dear. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Mitsukuni~ Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 @Bloody lol yeah i meant the writing ^__^ your welcome dear~ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 -stares- Wet dreams,bud? XD Joking,joking. I like it. (: You should write a poem for me.;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 Nicely written (= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now