~°•~ Dedicate a poem to your YO's pals ~•°~

[Saga]

 

I had this thought in my mind that it'd be so beautiful to have a thread where you can give as a surprise a poem dedicated to someone from here. A few poems like such,I've seen but it's so frustrating to look up for them when I just feel like re-reading them.

 

If you want you are free to post your poem and write on the bottom to who it's dedicated.

Here,I feel like writing one.

 

•°Phoenix of the rising Moon°•

 

You stand there,

Under the shower of silver rays.

My eyes kept gaze down

As I walked through

the dark of this dawn.

 

No word was said,

no touch was made.

Only a pure ring

was what came.

 

It's been a while now,

I remember the image of

you who knew no evil,

you who knew only to dream,

you who helped me to scream.

 

In an instant,

together we shout for the sky,

in an instant you speed the lie.

A lie that was broken as a mirror,

for me to see a silver ray of light.

 

No word was said,

no touch was made.

Only a pure ring

was what came.

 

It was like yesterday,

but learned how to see today,

for you,for me

It's a lagoon that only a Moon

can create out of a Phoenix.

 

(Dedicated to Bloodysadist.)

[SailorRishi]

Saga, nice poem

[Saga]

Thanks Rishi,

Won't you dedicate a poem to someone ;P

[Jin.]

Y u people sp perfect in poems.

[SailorRishi]

Ok i will try:)

I wrote poems in the past as a Teenager, i can try once again.

[Saga]

I'll wait then ;P

[Bloodysadist]

Woah Saga! Thank you ^_^ I really like it *_*

[DarkDjinn53]

This is not mine, but a favorite that was called to mind when I read the title of the thread...

 

Will you be my friend?

 

There are so many reasons why you never should;

I'm sometimes sullen, often shy, acutely sensitive,

my fear erupts as anger, I find it hard to give,

I talk about myself when I'm afraid

and often spend a day without anything to say.

 

But I will make you laugh

and love you quite a bit

and hold you when you’re sad.

 

I cry a little almost every day

because I'm more caring than the strangers ever know.

And if, at times I show my tender side

(the soft and warmer part I hide)

I wonder,

will you be my friend?

 

A friend

Who far beyond the feebleness of any vow or tie

will touch the secret place where I am really I.

To know the pain of lips that plead and eyes that weep,

who will not run away when they find me in the street

alone and lying mangled by my quota of defeats,

but will stop and stay - to tell me of another day

when I was beautiful.

 

Will you be my friend?

There are so many reasons why you never should;

often I'm too serious, seldom predictably the same,

sometimes cold and distant, probably I'll always change.

I bluster and brag, seek attention like a child,

I brood and pout, my anger can be wild.

 

But I will make you laugh

and love you quite a bit

and be near when you're afraid.

 

I shake a little almost every day

because I'm more frightened than the strangers ever know.

And if, at times, I show my trembling side

(the anxious, fearful part I hide)

I wonder,

will you be my friend?

 

A friend

Who when I fear your closeness, feels me push away

and stubbornly will stay to share what’s left on such a day.

Who when no one knows my name, or calls me on the phone

when there’s no concern for me - what I have or haven't done,

and those I've helped and counted on, have, oh so deftly, run

who when there's nothing left but me

stripped of charm and subtlety,

will nonetheless remain.

 

Will you be my friend?

 

For no reason that I know

except, I want you so.

 

by James Kavanaugh

 

dedicated to all that read this

 

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[Kisecchi]

@DarkDjinn53.. this poem was soooo beautiful and meaningful. I like it lot of, thanks for sharing