DarkDjinn53 Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Been dealing with life - so haven't written anything the past week or so - so here's one from about 7 years ago ...been lost in my darkness... so long... belief suspended ...insular and there you were I step out into the light ... blinking ... spring... smell of rain so...clean you ... considering ... me seems a foreign concept ... a long lost memory so... ...change suspension of disbelief (sur)reality of someone who may fit me Considering... ...consideration... ...consider it ...so... I breathe you in ...drink you...like water Moving... ...movement... ...forward motion What is it I'm thinking (deep breath) I want to run with you... ...play with you... be...within you You feel like...home Reading my words...I reference what calls... You are like the silver dusk... that place on the horizon ...that pulls I've been searching for... ...that feeling of... ...anticipation... so strong... like that moment before ...orgasm... I feel this in you If you want me... …what I am ... what I will be I can be...anywhere The chance to grow with you ...learn who you are... experience...you these things I don't want to miss I may have found one of my kind ...rare... ...and so many years between ... Your voice... your eyes... the way you walk... dip your head... smile these things I don't want to miss This...warmth...you've inspired in me so like the things I yearn for so long... it's beyond memory Just being you has me forgetting to build that wall ...so quick... ...so fast... To be... ...friends ...companions ...lovers It does not matter... where ...it only matters that it's so You have become...dear you are in... ...you are ... my heart 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Brilliant. That's my comment. Enough said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Agree... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leslie_LC Posted April 8, 2012 Share Posted April 8, 2012 Awesome poem! So emotional and so deep, so well written! I loved reading it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDjinn53 Posted April 11, 2012 Author Share Posted April 11, 2012 @ Saga, Bridget & Leslie -Thanks! I finally started going through my work and getting it in the computer. When I'm done I am going to try to get them published - or do it myself. Thanks for reading 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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