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Just wait until the 'good stuff'


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My heart is racing rapidly

My breath comes out in pants.

I feel your lips lingering

I won't give up this chance

 

I look into those lust filled eyes

I feel your skin on mine

This strange sensation that surfaces

I'm now trying to define.

 

You plant your kisses on my skin

Your marking what you claim

As I return the favor

It's to show I feel the same

 

I finally feel your lips on mine

The taste is bittersweet

Your tongue it battles with my own

But I will not admit defeat.

 

Your hands began to move around

Explorers on the run

The destination is unknown

But getting there is half the fun

 

Your eyes drink in each part of me

My face has gone dark red.

You tell me that I'm perfect to you

Tears now I try not to shed.

 

Each touch and tease is way too much

Yet I can't get enough

You kiss me with a wicked grin

'I'm just getting to the good stuff.'

 

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Your marking what you claim

 

Did you mean "you're marking what you claim" ?

 

This is a very passionate and flirty poem. I like the choice of words and the overall flow of it.

Otsukare, Tat-chan! :)

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I like your poem a lot! This is my favorite part, the end, very very nice :D

Each touch and tease is way too much

Yet I can't get enough

You kiss me with a wicked grin

'I'm just getting to the good stuff.'

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You plant your kisses on my skin

Your marking what you claim

As I return the favor

It's to show I feel the same

Your hands began to move around

Explorers on the run

The destination is unknown

But getting there is half the fun

Each touch and tease is way too much

Yet I can't get enough

You kiss me with a wicked grin

'I'm just getting to the good stuff.'

one of few poems that i really like

normally i hate poems ...

nice job

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