BRIDGET Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 There’s a light dazzling me that doesn’t allow me to see A forbidden end road I want to go A force that pushes and poisons me There’s a glass cage from which I want to run away There’s a volcano ready to erupt An incandescent rain burning me There’s a sin I want to commit A word I deny myself to pronounce I shove all the thoughts I leave my mind blank I try to be someone I’m not Do I do it for your sake? I do it for my sake A fear I can’t face A pain I can’t bear A fighter? A coward instead.. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karin Posted June 3, 2012 Share Posted June 3, 2012 I love this poem, I kinda find myself in those lines. leaf4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDjinn53 Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 Thank you, my lovely Bridget - you stirred up something with that one... walk the path to your true self no cage can hold the sleeping dragon of desire no fire enough to burn no rain enough to drown for it shines more brightly than the sun just close your eyes see with your heart fear will fade in the glow of a soul given wings HR][/hr] 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BRIDGET Posted June 5, 2012 Author Share Posted June 5, 2012 @DarkDjinn53 thank you! I mean...I'm glad that my humble verses inspired yours..It's a beautiful one, like all your poems.. I liked it very much... I don't know why but short verses have always a stronger impact that long ones.. Thanks again.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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