EarlGrey Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 Something out of the box for me. Violence. Time is ticking. Your now down to two enemies. One at your left, the other at your right. You gasp for breathe. Feeling the red seep through your clothes and onto the broken ground. You curse, muttering a hex and go to strike. The pain feeds your anger, you hope to be strong. Strong enough to stop the enemy. He dodges, landing a blow to your side. You collapse, gasping once again. Your vision is fuzzy, air is scarce. You hear loud voices but in many tongues. Your confused, hurt, and scared. Thinking you could win was foolish. Clenching your fist around the hilt, you swing once more. Scarlet glistens off of the cool steel. The voices stop, a thud meets next to you. Looking up you see your enemy on the ground in two. You smile, feeling victorious. Watching in silence, the last enemy surrenders. You nod, showing mercy upon the young woman. Thankful, she weeps, clinging to her child. Looking to the heavens, you join them, over-joyed. The war is over. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morinaga's Girl Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 I liked a lot the positive note, very beautiful *__* You smile, feeling victorious. Watching in silence, the last enemy surrenders. You nod, showing mercy upon the young woman. Thankful, she weeps, clinging to her child. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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